consider these two passages, irrespective of their
speed metal blows away nu metal for a few reasons.
first, speed metal bands demonstrate greater technical
skill. second, speed metal rises to a higher energy
level. and third, speed metal musicians wear cooler
nu metal is blown away by speed metal for a few reasons.
first, greater skill is demonstrated by speed metal
bands. second, speed metal is of a higher energy level.
third, cooler stuff is worn by speed metal musicians.
so now, a multi-choice quiz:
is the difference between passages I and II?
nothing really, just minor phrasing
2) nothing really, except the incessant use of the
passive tense, which paints the writer as a useless,
florid dipshit who couldn't string a clear and decisive
sentence together under any circumstances.